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Villain by ~SirMaroc:iconSirMaroc:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open




Attack of my ship
attack of my soul
torpedoed to doom
this villain did seem
to know what to do.

Expressing myself
this truth did seem
to torment this villain
attacker of dreams.

Cast by this light
the darkness behind
his weakness behold
a peace yet untold.
©2006-2008 ~SirMaroc
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Submitted: Nov 23, 2006
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The tale of a villain,
and yet no one will see...

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~Kamikaye:iconKamikaye: Nov 24, 2006, 3:11:49 PM Mood: Joy
Very beautiful end in my opinion :)

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~SirMaroc:iconSirMaroc: Nov 24, 2006, 3:33:26 PM
thank you, very much!
i hope that it leaves you
having your own meaning about peace...

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loving the writer..
~Dana-Scully:iconDana-Scully: Nov 25, 2006, 4:10:19 PM
I also thought that it was beautiful
~SirMaroc:iconSirMaroc: Nov 25, 2006, 6:38:46 PM
you are far to kind to me!
thank you! :o!

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loving the writer..
~edubz02:iconedubz02: Nov 26, 2006, 11:09:39 PM
i have never read anything like this before. its really good, and it flows really nicely. whos the villian? a metaphor?

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~Kateri12:iconKateri12: Nov 29, 2006, 12:43:43 PM
I like the concept of this poem! Great job!

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~SirMaroc:iconSirMaroc: Nov 29, 2006, 3:57:37 PM
thank you greatly

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~Dana-Scully:iconDana-Scully: Nov 30, 2006, 4:25:09 PM
Well what are friends for?
~SirMaroc:iconSirMaroc: Nov 30, 2006, 5:30:32 PM
to help friends. and i believe your a true friend!

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loving the writer..
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